Yea! It’s Sunday and time for Six Sentence Sunday
Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and really a great way to meet new writers!
And I’ve met some terrific people. Thank you !
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Last week continued.
Observing that his presence embarrassed her, and not wishing to cause her further unease, he bid her a “Good Evening” and continued on his way downstairs.
Kathryn’s heart boomed in her ears like a parade’s marching band.
With a shaking hand she turned the knob and entered her room.
Once safely out of sight, she closed the door and took the few steps needed to perch on the edge of the bed, her fingers still clutching the toiletries.
Calm down. What has unsettled me so that I cannot breathe?
This is such a great concept. I think I may look into doing it.
Everyone is welcome and it is great
Your male character is such a gentleman. And, I love, love that she is blushing internally whether she wants to admit it or not over some feeling (hopefully romantic) that is stirring inside her!
He’s too much of a gentleman actually lol
How very sweet the way he left her, and she is smitten with him though she’d never admit it.
such a good word..
Poor thing doesn’t realize what she’s got. A bad case of the may-I-have-you-please-s Great six!
well not quite but your comment made me smile..
She knows what’s upset her–she just needs to find a way to admit it to herself. And he seems to have more than just a passing interest in her, so she’d better come to the realization quickly. i doubt Mr. Thomas is going to wait to approach her. Kathryn needs to be prepared! Great six! I really can’t wait to read this!
boy are you in for a surprise
I know what’s got you unsettled, dear! I would be too! Mr. Thomas sounds yummy!
He is yummy – but….
Great take on her emotions. I love a proper gentleman who easily inspires such reactions. Lovely!
Yes – he is too proper perhaps
Fun! Things are really starting to crackle and pop between these two. I’m loving this story. Great six!! =D
I sure hope so…
Oh, I think she knows, but nice scene!
in her heart she does
I really like this week’s snippet. My favorite so far of all your six sunday posts. I especially like the phrase,”Kathryn’s heart boomed in her ears like a parade’s marching band.” It’s so hard to come up with metaphors & similes for pounding hearts. Good job with that one!
why thank you so very much
Wonder when she’ll admit what has unsettled her? Great six.
Well actually not til the end….
Sue, I love the direction this is going and well done on “showing” us her emotions instead of telling about them.
thank you so much – I have a problem “showing” sometimes
That man must be hot… or ‘hiding’ something really strange…
Awww you guessed….
Nice six! I like how he stole her breathe:)
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Stole her breath? I love that! She’d better decide how she feels about him real soon!
hehehe
Intresting. Things definitely seem to be heating up between these two. Now he just needs to stop being such a complete gentleman! lol
well that is a problem – he is too complete a gentleman
He’s such a gentleman. I’m intrigued by your sentences… but your comments really have me wondering. LOL.
giggle – excellent – keeps you on your toes
Such a great job giving the readers an inside view of her intense reaction, all the while, keeping the hero in the dark. Great six!
what makes you think he’s in the dark?
The closing line in her voice makes this six.
Thank you for the comment