Six Sentence Sunday Feb 27

It’s time again for  

 Six Sentence Sunday. Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and a great way to meet new writers!

This is my first entry with this group. My lines are from a series of character sketches which I hope will form a short story collection at some point.

Oh, Oh here comes trouble, thought Joleene, the paralegal in the law firm.

“Good afternoon, Chester,” she said and smiled. She noticed a slight flutter in her tummy.

Chester did not smile back. Instead, glowering, he asked,  “Did you check over this brief for my court case tomorrow?”
“Yes I did,  I double checked and corrected the section of the Act you referenced; it is 21(f) not 23(d) as you had indicated.”

Be sure to check out the other great participants and thanks so much for stopping by!

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42 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday Feb 27

  1. hthurmeier says:

    Nice snippet! Welcome to SSS!

  2. She caught his mistake! Well done.

  3. Welcome to SSS!

    Not liking Chester too much. But I love the paralegal!

  4. Lisa Fox says:

    Chester needs to learn some manners!

  5. Sarah Grimm says:

    welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Really enjoyed your six! I wonder how Chester reacts to being corrected?


  6. fun and interesting lol Welcome to SSS!

  7. Nice six. I wonder if Chester will change his ways.

  8. Cathy M says:

    Great start to SSS.

  9. Lauri J Owen says:

    Welcome to SSS! I enjoyed your post. Do you work in law?

    • sassyspeaks says:

      thank you – no I don’t work in Law, and have no idea why Chester picked this profession out for himself. I did work with legislation before I retired. thanks for the good comment !

  10. Welcome to SSS

    You’re doing a wonderful job of portraying both Chester (the ‘ol stuffed shirt) and the paralegal here.

    Great debut to Six Sentence Sunday. Looking forward to more in the future.

  11. Sassy heroine! Welcome to SSS!

  12. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. What an introduction to Chester. Good for Joleene for checking his work…and correcting it.

    I’ll look forward to reading more of your work in weeks to come.

  13. Nice snippet. I bet he doesn’t even thank her. 😦

  14. Glad to have you here for 6 Sunday. I enjoy reading about real world things like law. Glad she caught his error, that might not have turned out well for him.

  15. Emily Cale says:

    Welcome to SSS! These look like the start to a great story.

  16. Ooo! very interesting! and welcome to SSS!!


  17. wondering why she has a flutter in her stomach, could it be she’s scared of him, or turned on just by being near him. Hmmm I’d like to read more to find out 🙂 Nice Six!!

  18. Graylin Fox says:

    Welcome to the group, with legal flutters and all!

  19. Great to see you here, Sue! *waves* 😀

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