Six Sentence Sunday April 3



It’s time again for Six Sentence Sunday

Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and a great way to meet new writers!

Be sure to check out the other great participants and thanks so much for stopping by!

Last week from the story Devil’s Mistress

She is paralyzed observing a good looking man after a car  crashes – and knows she saw a light flash  close to the vehicle. He is aware she was watching him  – her finger is still on the “9″ of her cell intending to call 911.

 He speaks:


“Hi there. Did you see that accident?”

“Yes”, and I blurted out the rest, “And I saw you kinda whisper to the driver and a blip of a light came out of the car and vanished.”

He smiled a Johnny Depp sort of grin. “Most people are blind to me and to what transpired there.”

He noticed my state of confusion and offered a suggestion: “why don’t you call 911 but block your number, so that this man is taken care of and let me buy you a coffee and we can discuss what you think you saw.”


ok – next week I can spill the beans as to who he is – or carry on with the story….. even if you know what he is, the story is still amusing, I think anyway 😀


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32 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday April 3

  1. bluerose says:

    “what you think you saw” – ha! can’t wait to hear his explanation for this!

  2. “What you think you saw” sounds like a good discussion in the making. lol

  3. Marie Dees says:

    Nah, don’t spill the beans. Keep going. And then make us buy the book!

  4. I’d love to know more!

  5. Lauri J Owen says:

    Oooooo – but is he a rogue? should she go with him – or not? Can’t wait till next week!

  6. I can’t wait to find out what he is and what he did. Nice six!

  7. can’t wait to see what he is!

  8. Lindsay says:

    Spill the beans. Please, spill the beans.

  9. Lorien Velez says:

    Great six! Can’t wait to read more and find out who he is. 🙂

  10. you had me at ‘Johnny Depp Smile’ LMAO …oh, and this just gets more and more intriguing…what she thinks she saw? LOVE IT I’m really curious to know what the bleep is going on here. Really curious.

  11. Lynne Murray says:

    Curiouser and curioser–an intriguing six!

  12. Wow…that six…seven packed a punch. I wonder what he’s going to convince her she really saw.

  13. He had me with his Johnny Depp smile *wink*wink*

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