Six Sentence Sunday April 10

It’s time again for Six Sentence Sunday

Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and a great way to meet new writers!

Be sure to check out the other great participants and thanks so much for stopping by! I really really appreciate it 😀

OK last week I promised to explain what the good looking man, with the Johnny Depp smile, does. And what the glimmer of light is that the woman saw coming from a crashed car.

It may take 12 sentences… so use your imagination for now 😀

I am the Devil’s Mistress.  Well, not The Devil Himself, but one member of the mid management team.  As we all know the Devil collects souls; similar to a debt collector. Usually a contract is signed between the client and Mr. D, as I refer to him; though sometimes I call him worse, like asshole or dickhead, especially when my lover has to work too many hours.

When everything works out the client receives whatever benefit has been negotiated for and lives out his life. Then the time comes for the client to pass on, as they say in polite society, and the soul must be collected by Mr. D and sent on its merry way to Hell.



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43 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday April 10

  1. Giving up the soul is so not worth it. All you get is an eternity in hell.

  2. Lindsay says:

    Cute six. Sort of a ‘Devil Went Down to Georgia’ but with a hotter ending.

  3. Claire Robyns says:

    Ah, love the sassy nine-to-five explanation, lol

  4. lol mid management team. Great 6!

  5. Very smart writing. Middle management. Great work.

  6. Marie Dees says:

    hmm, interesting backstory.

  7. Employee of Hell, great concept. 🙂

  8. Character’s voice comes across well. Love that he refers to the devil as Mr. D or Dickhead.

  9. Arlene Webb says:

    Mr D, I love it, including all the other names for Satan. Humur, great set up, I’m hooked!

  10. Very casual tone for such an intense subject, but it works well. Nice six!

  11. Lorien Velez says:

    Great description and humor. Nicely done! 🙂

  12. Cate Masters says:

    lol, sent on its merry way to Hell. Love the touch of humor. Fun six.

  13. Lauri J Owen says:

    Woo hoo! What an amazing way to lay it out! Great job!

  14. Kerrianne says:

    Great concept x interesting

  15. I love that the middle management guy has a mistress annoyed at his long hours. (But I hope you are not going to be giving away everything so soon!)

    • sassyspeaks says:

      hmm not sure what you mean about “everything” – wanted to let people know about the glimmer of light – the story is not so much about what he does but about their relationship – sooo your comment confused me….

  16. Cara Bristol says:

    “Mr. D.” Lol Cute.

  17. Liana Brooks says:

    That’s not a usual sort of job.

  18. Lynne Murray says:

    I love the hellish bureaucracy idea! Tell us more! Great six!

  19. Gayle Ramage says:

    Absolutely love this!

  20. still love the mid management team 😉

  21. ::grins:: Thanks for the backstory. Good concept.

    Good luck with it.

    All my best,
    Allure Van Sanz

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