Work in Progress for Blogophilia 17.4


 

 

 

The group congregated, as they always did, on Saturday morning, weather permitting at the old school yard. Inclement conditions found them at the local delicatessen — where the owner didn’t mind hearing their laughter and raised voices. Business was slow at this old fashioned deli so it wasn’t like customers were turned away due to the group’s presence.

The owner, Nate, would occasionally look at the group and wonder what they had in common. After all this time he knew their names, at least.

This particular Saturday Carole and Charles sat waiting for the rest of the group to arrive. Carole’s golden sweater set off her short, curly red hair giving off a cheerful impression. So far the day showed promise of total boredom. She listlessly played with the ice in her coke twirling it around with her straw and frowning into the glass.  Charles hated cold weather. The south is where he called home and how he ended up in this huge, northern, cold city he just didn’t know.

The restaurant door opened letting in a blast of frigid air and Joey.

Carole looked up, with brightened eyes.  “Joey, about time you got here. What’s that you’re carrying? It looks heavy.”

Charles didn’t say anything, just smiled his sweet grin at Joey. Joey always made everyone laugh.

The newcomer carefully placed his package on the table, shrugged out of his coat and looked around. “Where is everyone?”

Carole said, “They all seem to be late today.”

Joey plunked himself into the seat. “Look what I found!”

Squinting at him, Carole said, “What you found? Or what you ‘borrowed’?”

Nate stopped by the table and asked Joey what he wanted. Joey ordered a black coffee. He was the only one of the group who drank coffee. ”Oh, and a piece of blueberry pie, if you’ve got any.” Nate nodded and headed to the counter to get Joey’s order. They always had blueberry pie. It was a good seller.

Beaming Joey showed off what he had brought. “Look, it’s a Troll for the yard. Isn’t it ugly?”

He was terribly pleased with his prize. Carole and Charles examined the thing. Yep, it certainly was ugly. A thought popped into Carole’s head. It must have been a case of sheer madness for you to pick up that piece of junk.

With a hurt expression, in response to the others’ withering looks, Joey replied, “No, I did not steal it. How can you say such a thing?”  Joey was known to bend the rules of the law, on more than one occasion.

The eatery was practically devoid of people so the train whistling by made quite the clatter. The train tracks were a block from the deli.

Charles perked up. “Listen to the sound of that train. Notice how it changes as it goes by?”

Carole and Joey just looked at him. He was a quiet sort though at the moment he seemed quite animated. “It’s called the Doppler shift. That change in sound.”

They all listened as the train continued down the line.

“Boy that train seemed to take forever to go by. It’s like sands going through an hour glass.”

Joey, exasperated by this gobbledygook from Charles asked “What the hell are you talking about man?”

Abashed, Charles admitted that he belonged to a writing group called Blogophilia. Though he had no idea what the word meant, nor what a blog could possibly be–this was decades before the advent of computers, so it was strange indeed. “These were the prompts that we had to use this week so I used them!”

Fed up, Carole, with sarcasm dripping in her tone, looked at Charles. “Yeah, next you’re gonna tell me the group is run by a Martian! You certainly sound like one!”

Just then, the rest of the group fell into the place at the same time and the subject was dropped.

 

 

Written for:

Blogophilia 17.4 Topic: “A Troll for the Yard”

Bonus Points:

(Hard, 2pts): use “sands going through an hour-glass”

(Easy, 1pt): mention Doppler shift

 

 

 

 

 

Advertisements
This entry was posted in Blogophilia, Fiction, Writing and tagged , , . Bookmark the permalink.

27 Responses to Work in Progress for Blogophilia 17.4

  1. LOL it is run by mighty fine Martian, waving hi to Marvin and the gang it’s Lori aka Sonnets. Very amusing write Sassy First?? lol

  2. Lindsay says:

    Great write and love how you worked in the two bonus point phrases

  3. bluerose says:

    LOL! the talk of Doppler shift made me think of Monty Python. “… and now for something completely different.” 😉

  4. Chuck says:

    Martians?? Oh my!!

  5. Liam says:

    LOL u kno it was funny cos when i started to read it i imagined to be 2 members of blogophilia waiting for the rest to arrive u know like on monday nights..lol
    its blogophlia group in 1985 *gasp* O.O i wasnt even born yet

  6. Well done Sue!!! I love your dialogue, it’s witty and realistic!!! And that line about the group being run by a Martin…. awesome!!!!! 😀

    Great job and I’ll take a piece of blueberry pie, too!

    😉

  7. Marvin Martian says:

    Awesome! I Love it! Blogophilia has transgressed the time space continuim as we know it and have now; post planted the pre foundations for a Blogophilia adventure into the future/past unknown! Shall we go back to the future now? 8 points Earthling! 🙂

  8. Irene Melgoza says:

    Great write! : )

  9. hahahahahahaha! by a Martian!

  10. This was awesome! It seems that troll had some secret powers! He can join Blogophilia too!
    It is a timeless experience! Every week while I feel a doppler shift. We all get the same topic and bonus points but the sound and tone of everyone’s blogs are so different!

    And now that my last comment just inspired my own blog, I can sit and write it!

  11. DJ Myke says:

    Hey, Sassy One…

    Look at you giving away all our trade secrets. You did that with such ease, I am left wondering if it was not you that provided all the prompts this week. Now, I am too late to hazard a guess.

    I see you have Marvin all wound up, to the point he is expounding on time space continuim. That makes him very happy, very happy indeed. It is like giving me a segue to talk about The Grand Ole Opry. 🙂

    • sassyspeaks says:

      I’m glad I waited up for you – was worth waiting for 😀 What trade secrets??? I like to keep Marvin happy – yes – the grande olde opry…. carry on – you prob don’t even see my witty comments back to you lol

Aw come on say something....

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s