Six Sentence Sunday October 9

Yea! It’s Sunday and time for Six Sentence Sunday

Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and really a great way to meet new writers! And I’ve met some terrific people. Thank you !

Be sure to check out the other great participants and thanks so much for stopping by!


The Devil’s Mistress. On the night after she meets her soon to be lover and learns what he does, she has a sequence of “Dancing with the Devil” dreams.



Then the dream flipped to a scene right out of Dirty Dancing

He beckoned to her with curled index finger and soft lips mouthed, “Come to me, come to me.”

And, oh, she did; she melted right into him.

They danced; gyrating hip to hip with hungry eyes.

He in black, she in a skimpy blue dress, slit to the thigh, the music raucous, the lights dim.

They danced; her leg wound around his waist, she leaning into him, his groin kneading her back and she needing his touch, smelling the aura of lust, hair thrashing wildly with abandon in a dance session that set her pulse to race, body to blush, and eyes to gleam.




.The Devil’s Mistress, a paranormal romance, is about an unlucky in love woman and a man who works in mid-management for the Devil. He’s the one who dispatches souls to his boss, Mr. D. She vows to restore her lover’s humanity and not lose him in the process. The story is told entirely from her point of view.
















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46 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday October 9

  1. Oh this is very hot! I loved “melting into him” and, well, okay, and the whole last paragraph, actually! 😀

  2. jennajaxon says:

    Sizzling six! Hot as hell in fact, which I gather would be expected when you dance with the devil. Wonderful scene!

  3. Marie Dees says:

    Nice and hot and she’s enjoying every minute of it, isn’t she.

  4. Saucy six! 😉 Loe the use of kneading. Plus, dancing with the devil literally just sounds super cool.

  5. J.C. Martin says:

    You know what they say about dancing being the the vertical version of another activity…;) sexy six!


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  6. Wow, so hot and they still have their clothes on! 🙂

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  7. Lindsay says:

    Okay now that is HOT. To bad Dancing with the Stars isn’t like that

  8. Very sensual and hot. Nice pic too!

  9. Aimee Laine says:

    Pulse to racing. ‘Dancing’ will do that to ya. 😉

  10. Lorien Velez says:

    Very sensual and sexy. Love your description.

  11. Vivid imagery. Great six!

  12. Paula Martin says:

    Sensual six – love it! Sexy pic too!

  13. Lynne Murray says:

    This sounds like one of those dreams you don’t want to end–or one of the ones you want to come true! Hot six!

  14. Gem Sivad says:

    What a response he’s drawn from her. Great snippet to further the story.

  15. karysafaire says:

    “his groin kneading her back and she needing his touch” great play on words! Loved these six.

  16. Ooh this is so hot and so visual!! Love it 🙂

  17. Eleri Stone says:

    I never have dreams like that. Sure wish I did.

  18. Uhm, wow… amazingly written, Sue 😀

  19. That was hot – but it didn’t tell me that much about the characters, yet. Thanks for sharing!

  20. bluerose says:

    I agree with Karysafaire; I like the play on words too!

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