Yea! It’s Sunday and time for Six Sentence Sunday
Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and really a great way to meet new writers!
And I’ve met some terrific people. Thank you !
Be sure to check out the other great participants and thanks so much for stopping by.
A year already? It’s been wonderful meeting so many of you, reading your stories and receiving your feedback on mine. Thank you 😀 I’m so glad I joined this writing community!
This week I am sharing Nineteen Hundred my first historical short story.
Miss Kathryn St. Clair lifted her red velvet skirt, descended the stairs, Oh it smells so good down there, and upon hearing the clock in the foyer chime eight o’clock walked faster, finally reaching the normally dingy and dark breakfast area to find it transformed into an elegant dining room.
As the landlady lifted the spoon to dole out the aromatic soup, cream of leak if Kathryn could believe her nose, a man dashed in, smelling of the cold and rubbing his hands to warm them. Smiling in apology, his eyes acknowledged the rest of the diners and he sat in the last empty chair.
“My regrets, work kept me late.”
Mrs. Hodgson nodded in his direction, and said, “Welcome Mr. Thomas. Everyone this is our newest resident, Mr. Gideon Thomas, who has taken over Mr. Jackson’s room.”
Okay, now I’m hungry again and tonight is the perfect night for soup. Thanks for sharing. Have a great weekend.
Enjoy 😀
Nice six. Great descriptions.
Thanks for stopping by 😀
Ooh, a boardinghouse historical? I don’t think I’ve ever seen that. Intriguing! Great six. (It’s “leek” soup, though.) 🙂
You mean I’ve come up with something original?? wow
Great introduction of characters. I like it already.
and I hope you continue 😀
I agree, nice intro of the characters!
Thanks very much!
Great introduction to the story. You have a knack for making the characters vivid in just a few words. Can’t wait to read more. 🙂
Actually you have…. and will
Very nice description…enjoyed your six
and I yours – thanks for the visit
A lot of description! Good job!
thank you very much
Nice intro into the story – love the picture you depict here 🙂
and it’s all mine!
Nice detail. You put me in the boardinghouse.
It’s a nice place to be 😀
Mmmmm…I’m suddenly very hungry. Very descriptive six!
and you didn’t see yet all the food on the table…
I love how you build the atmosphere of the boarding house and the action really puts me in the moment there. Great six! What a wonderful storyline.
thanks – did not realise I was being so original
Wonderful intro to an intriguing world.
intriguing?
Sounds like it’ll be an interesting book 🙂
I sure hope so….
Great introduction to the story and characters, and I love the idea of a story set in a boarding house.
It never occurred to me that it is so rare…
Leaves me wondering the background stories of all of the characters mentioned. 🙂
Sorry – ain’t gonna happen 😀
Ah-ha! I think our hero just made his entrance!
lol pretty obvious I guess – yout got it 😀
Soup. Yum. Love the historical feel of the piece, and great accompanying picture!
Picture for the book cover – thank you so much!
“Smelling of the cold” is a small detail, but it really brings me into this story. Great atmosphere!
what a lovely comment 😀
Nice set up and interesting characters!
Thanks for stopping in 😀
Fantastic concept and wonderful six! Looking forward to reading more!
thanks Alix – you shall
I really like this. A boarding house takes the small town atmosphere and narrows the canvas even more. It’s an intriguing concept and a great way to layer characters, showing how they relate differently to different people, adding in the fact that they’re living with people they might never choose to interact with so closely.
Thank you for the thoughtful comment
Great sensory details to draw us into the scene, the setting and the characters. Fun six!
Thanks very much Lynne 😀
Very good details, and the formality of the dialog really sets the tone. Cool snippet.
Well I expect they were formal in those days
great six 😉
Note the spelling error ruthie found…
Your description is fantastic, though I feel like there may be a few run-ons. Doesn’t take away from the great introduction.
true – the first is a run on – wanted to see if I could do it 😀
I love historicals! Definitely, definitely back next week to read more and see where this story is going. 🙂
You’re always welcome for a visit 😀
Very atmospheric!
Sorry I haven’t been commenting lately. I kind of got overwhelmed by my book release, and now am trying to catch up on things!
Such an excellent reason to get distracted!
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