Yea! It’s Sunday and time for Six Sentence Sunday
Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and really a great way to meet new writers!
And I’ve met some terrific people. Thank you !
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Happy Mother’s Day 😀
If they had been introduced at home, her aunt would have accompanied them, but here she knew no one to act as chaperon, and if truth be told, the lack of a third party pleased her.
Two nights ago, walking home from the theatre, they had been so close that his finger tips had brushed against hers; the temptation teased her to hold his hand, so warm and comfortable.
He probably thought she hadn’t noticed since she had been chattering away, but she had noticed the stir of air as his fingers drew closer to hers.
I hope it was deliberate and not an accident.
She admonished herself to cease this train of thought at once; it felt so…evil.
No, she couldn’t mention Mr. Thomas to her mother, yet.
Very nice six. Full of yearning. 🙂 Happy Mother’s Day
Thanks Heather – yeah she does that a lot 😀
Yay! Love these six. 🙂
Yah! Thank you
This is getting absolutely romantic — in every old-fashioned sense of the word. The brush of fingertips, her inner thoughts. Lovely!!!
And the poem is coming along thanks to you 😀
Let’s hear it! Do you submit your poems for publishing?
I loved the end of that first line, really gave a good glimpse into her mind 😉
…although I think I spent way too long imagining the position of their hands in relation to each other to nearly brush fingertips… since when you’re walking, palms usually face in, so fingers would curl in, not out unless the wrist was bent outwards (which is more than a little awkward…)
It’s very cute 🙂
yeah which is why you’re going to help in the future – right?
Love her internal conflict! She wants, but… Great six! 🙂
Exactley – but…
Beautiful description of her longing and her conflicted feelings about Mr. Thomas. These six flowed like melted butter. Awesome!
Love her anguish and her longing, beautifully written.
Yep she’s conflicted for sure
Fun, romantic, sensual. I like the way the story is progressing. BTW, when I clicked on the SSS blog link to your site, the May 6 post popped up. i had to click on your six sentence sunday link to get the current post.
guess you’re in for a surprise..
Awesome…as beautiful as the picture above it.
thanks very much – can’t find your SSS
The hussy! LOL Beautifully written. “the stir of air as his fingers moved closer…” What a breathtaking line!
LOL – she’s wondering about that actually
Excellent six! Boo for chaperones! lol
oooh…I love the anticipation! Nicely done six!
thank you very much
Uh oh! Keeping secrets from her mum. *waggles brows* You’ve got some terrific emotion and imagery in this six!
well it’s not like her mother can see her – OMG if she could she would know…
The anticipation you’ve continued to build is simply delicious. I can’t wait to see what it bubbles into!
Hope you won’t be disappointed…
Oh, she’s definitely pining! Delightful six!!
yeah like a tree lol
No, not evil. But she’s struggling with all those “thou shalt nots” I can tell. Well done!
yeah no doubt – all these new experiences and feelings
Nice girls can enjoy a little evil now and then, lol. Hope she goes with it!
not in 1900 I don’t think
What a romantic six! Loved it!
glad you did 😀
I can imagine how scandalous that must have been in those days!
Very nice! I can feel her anticipation. 🙂
And mine 😀
This was everything romance should be – – sweet, poetic and full of yearning. I loved that there was such yearning in this with a wondrous tingle of anticipation. Lovely.
Thank you for your kind words 😀
Nice building of sexual tension!
Nice to see you 😀
Ooo, great job adding tension with only the thought of a hand hold. Fab!
That picture is perfect!