Six Sentence Sunday Sept 30

Yea! It’s Sunday and time for Six Sentence Sunday

Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and really a great way to meet new writers!

And I’ve met some terrific people. Thank you !

Be sure to check out the other great participants and thanks so much for stopping by.

From chapter three of the Misfits. Gideon and Phoebe met at an accident scene in the afternoon. He invited her for dinner in the evening at an Italian restaurant 10 kim out-of-town.

As she settled herself in the car, he took the opportunity to sweep his eyes over her body.

Happily she had changed out of her jeans.

The teal coloured skirt displayed shapely legs to advantage,  and a teasing glimpse of cleavage peeked through the V necked matching silk blouse.

Perfectly proportioned to her small boned body, her breasts outlined by the clinging fabric, suggested a nice handful.

Her piano fingers, with unpolished, long well-kept nails, sent sensual images to his mind.

An unfamiliar stirring in his loins surprised him in its intensity.
















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19 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday Sept 30

  1. Jessica Subject says:

    Yes, he wants her. 🙂

  2. Heather Boyd says:

    Nice six. Great detail.

  3. Carrie Crain says:

    Love your descriptions and introducing us to what he noticed.

  4. J.M. Blackman says:

    Going through the motions of his arousal was a…sensational experience. Hot six. 🙂

  5. Very nicely done and great detail. Very sexy six sentence. 🙂

  6. Elin Gregory says:

    Unfamiliar? Is this a first time story for him? that’s different. 🙂 Nice 6.

  7. Mae Clair says:

    Vivid descriptions! When a man notices that much detail about a woman, he’s a goner 🙂

  8. Yep, he’s got it bad! Great job with your vivid descriptions 🙂

  9. Jenna Jaxon says:

    Loved the phrase “a nice handful.” Tells me something about how he’s thinking of her, how sexually oriented his perusal is, like they’re already in his hands. Yep, he’s got the hots for her! Great descriptive six. 🙂

  10. I love “piano fingers” and also that he finds them sensual. Gotta love a man who appreciates more than just the obvious parts of a woman! 😉

  11. Sounds like he’s getting really invested in her 🙂

  12. Vivien Dean says:

    Lovely, sensual detail. Well done!

  13. Dana Mason says:

    An unfamiliar stirring? hum… *eyebrow raised* How unfamiliar? Love piano fingers. Nice six.

  14. Love the details! Great six.

  15. J.C. Martin says:

    Nice insight into his thoughts. He definitely likes what he sees!

  16. J.A. Beard says:

    Unfamiliar, eh? Talk about liking what you see. 🙂

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