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The Misfits is a group of four couples, consisting of four who work as part of the mid-management team for the devil, Mr.D, as soul collectors, and their partners, who are human.
Set up This is from chapter 4 the last one I drafted before starting NaNo where I hope to write the meat of the piece. It’s the evening of the first day Gideon and Phoebe met at an accident scene. Later he asked her out for dinner In Nineteen Hundred he had not told Kathryn what he was and dire consequences resulted.
Continuing from last week
“Gideon what’s wrong?” Phoebe placed her hand over his on the glass.
“Your fingers are twirling that wineglass so rapidly, I’ve never seen anyone do that with such speed. The wine appears ready to slosh out. If you keep that up I’m afraid the glass will fall onto the cloth and shatter.
You told me this afternoon you are an agent of the devil, and earlier you acted with boldness and aplomb but when I look at you now all I see is a man with a very worried expression on his face, eyes unfocussed, slouched over in his seat and you turn pale with chills and then red with sweat.”
Something is so about to happen! Or, maybe something happened to him earlier with his “boss.” You’ve got my head’s wheels spinning with curiosity!
The “clue” was last week — she had Kathryn’s dreams and now he’s trying to process that…
Hmm, very interesting six. Looking forward to next week’s six.
I will be here 😀
I’m wondering what’s wrong as well. Nice build up. 🙂
He realises she has Kathryn’s memories…
Very obvious signs that something is bothering him! Well described, l loved it!
muchly appreciated. I played a long time with that glass so I could describe it 😀
Wonderful details and rising tension to show his worry.
He is terrified!
Whatever’s wrong, it doesn’t bode well. Let’s not forget who he works for. @_@
Actually it bodes well, in a sense, he gets a second chance
The tension is rising. Very good Six. Can’t wait to see next week. 🙂
he is very tense. He can’t believe his conclusion
That’s interesting. Her speech patterns are sliding a teensy bit into the nineteenth century. Is she channelling Kathryn? Lots of foreshadowing in this six. Great hook.
No she’s not channeling Kathryn, yet. Guess I’m still hooked in nineteen hundred
The contrast between Gideon spinning the wine glass so fast and Phoebe speaking so slow is interesting.
I didn’t realise she was speaking so slowly…
Well, that’s a big, dark set-up 🙂
Actually the set up was last week… He’s behind a rock and a hard place with the information he’s processing
Intriguing six. He’s obviously got a real problem!
That he does for sure 😀
Her dialogue makes it incredibly easy to visualize what’s going on. Thanks for sharing!
thank you – that’s a huge compliment
He’s definitely upset–and with good reason considering the revelation last week. But I’m fascinated by her calm acceptance of his confession to being the devil’s agent. Sounds like she should be just as freaked out! Intriguing six!
If she freaked out as much as you think she should they would not be together
She has some great observation and insight of him.
yes she does 😀
I like how concerned she is for him.
Yeah I may have to change that 😀
Something’s about to happen. Interesting, well paced six. I quite enjoyed it. I’m also jealous that your NaNo is so polished. You’re doing a great job 🙂
😀 that’s not from my NaNo oh my no
Lots of information here. Interested to see what comes next!
I need to backtrack to last week 😉
Intriguing six! Interesting that she calls him on this to try to get him to reveal what’s on his mind. Curious to see how he reacts. 🙂