Six Sentence Sunday Dec 16


Yea! It’s Sunday and time for Six Sentence Sunday

Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and really a great way to meet new writers!

And I’ve met some terrific people. Thank you !

Be sure to check out the other great participants and thanks so much for stopping by.

The Misfits is a group of four couples, consisting of four who work as part of the mid-management team for the devil, Mr.D, as soul collectors, and their partners, who are human.  

Set up: Victor and Beth, both devil’s agents, are at Maggie’s Place listening to poetry and music. The place is crowded and they were warned they may have to share their table. Charles and Eve are friends and human.

Beth broke off her conversation with Victor to glance at the couple the hostess seated at the table.

They looked like a twosome but maybe people would think she and Victor were a couple also.

Her interest was piqued by the man’s long blonde hair neatly tied in a pony tail.

She made eye contact with him and nodded.

When the waiter brought the drinks, he gave the man’s beer to her and her cocktail to him.

“Oh this must be yours,” Beth said, as they exchanged beverages his fingers brushed hers, followed by a  tingling sensation at the contact.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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32 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday Dec 16

  1. Hi honey 🙂

    I’ve nominated you for Blog Of The Year 2012!

    http://the-view-outside.com/2012/12/16/im-collecting-stars-update/

    Hope you decide to accept 🙂

    Xx

  2. Heather Boyd says:

    Interesting. Is the waiter keen to help her hook up? Great six.

  3. Lisa Fox says:

    A very interesting exchange and those tingles are promising.

  4. Chance meetings can be so promising and clearly, this is one of those situations. Wonderful set up.

  5. Cara Bristol says:

    What happens next, I wonder. Hmm…

  6. Jessica Subject says:

    Love those tingles from a simple touch. 🙂

  7. So many good things here 🙂

  8. Gemma Parkes says:

    This looks like it’s going to be an interesting time.

  9. Looks like the start of an interesting relationship!

  10. Paula Martin says:

    Love the tingle at that first touch!

  11. I wasn’t sure why the other couple was there, but it’s becoming clear now. 🙂

    • Sue says:

      yes the two devil’s agents attended and the two humans. It’s how the two couples meet. With a six sentence limit it’s difficult sometimes especiall since this is from my unedited NaNo

  12. I always like these first moments when people meet and feel that spark of attraction.

  13. Kate Warren says:

    Note to Beth: tip the waiter extra.

  14. Jenna Jaxon says:

    Looks like things are looking up for Beth if she’s getting all tingly at his touch. Nice scene.

  15. My interest was piqued by that long blonde hair in a ponytail too. LOL Can’t wait to see where these tingles lead them. 🙂

  16. J.A. Beard says:

    Tingling, eh? Interesting.

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  18. I think I know where this is heading… 🙂

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