Yea! It’s Sunday and time for Six Sentence Sunday
Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and really a great way to meet new writers!
And I’ve met some terrific people. Thank you !
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Merry Christmas
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year Everyone. We’ll be travelin’ and hope to return mid January.
The Misfits is a group of four couples, consisting of four who work as part of the mid-management team for the devil, Mr.D, as soul collectors, and their partners, who are human.
Edit: thinking of new title: The Soul Collector’s Second Chance (what do you think?)
Set up Still at Maggie’s Place
Eve, who had chatted with Victor as Beth had with Charles, looked around, and asked “Where’s Victor?”
She seemed upset when Beth told her he went to work, and judging by her face appeared disappointed as well.
Beth had noticed Eve and Victor occasionally glanced at each other when they thought the other was not looking as they listened to the music.
Tapping Charles on the shoulder, Eve said, “I reckon to should be getting home since I’m working in a few hours.”
Charles nodded and leaned toward Beth.
“We drove here in my car and now Eve has to leave. Do y’all need a ride home?”
I haven’t done SSS for AGES! Will get back into it in the New Year 🙂
Xx
The new title does give you a better sense of the story line so yes, I like it better than misfits.
thank you Heather. I think more improvement is needed though
I like the new title better. 🙂 Nice six.
Thanks Jess. Hopefully the nice weather will continue
Yes, that’s a better title.
thanks but I’m still not happy with it
Love the new title. I vote for tha one, Sue. Have a safe trip and Merry Christmas!
Thanks Mae and the same to you 😀
Yes, the new title works better. Why is Eve upset that Victor went to work? What does she think or suspect? Nice six!
He didn’t tell her he was leaving and she fears will not see him again
I vote for the new title as well! Gives more of a hint toward the content. Nice look into this moment that Beth has noticed the attraction between Victor and Eve.
Actually doesn’t make sense Beth would have noticed but this is total draft and had to keep it in Beth POV
Interesting underlying tensions here. The new title does work better.. Merry Christmas!
Thanks Kate 😀
Like the new title. Wonder what trouble they’ll all get into once they leave?
the kind of trouble you’re thinking of 😀
I agree with the others about the title, wonder where Victor’s gone?
Sorry, I said last week he went to work
The new title fits them so perfectly.
Thanks Llindsay 😀
Hmm….wonder who’s home they’ll end up at? 🙂 Like the new title, BTW!
thank 😀 well Beth and Charles end up at his place. And When Eve finishes her shift she eventually ends up at Victor’s home. she’s a worrier though so for a while she felt like a teen-ager waiting for a boy to call. LOL some boy! he’s about 200. But he did call 😀
I think she’ll say yes! 🙂