WeWriWa – Questions

Set up: Gideon meets with the demon to get answers. From my WIP The Soul Collector’s Second Chance.

Welcome to another warrior Sunday!

Last week I inadvertently misled you. Memnoche slipped into a house and returned with no explanation. It was simply a device to give Gideon a chance to collect his thoughts. The imp was only doing his job. (Whatever that might be)


Gideon attempted to organize his thoughts in light of this information.

“One question, the group….”

“Oh yes I am familiar with your bunch ahhaah. You do have fun times,” and Memnoche winked his eye, well it wa more of a flicker, since his eye lids weren’t functional.

Disconcerted Gideon carried on.

“We know each of the four of us has a special skill, for example…”

“Yes, yes I know all about it, so what is your question?”

“Do other agents also have specialized skills and do soul collectors who work in the same terriroty know each other or is it merely a fluke that we four met?”

Skills: Gideon smell, Victor hearing, Beth touch and Myrth is a witch (not technically an ability).

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16 Responses to WeWriWa – Questions

  1. Jenna Jaxon says:

    I wonder where Gideon is going with this question? Or if he’s going anywhere. Maybe he just wants as much info as possible. And it sounds like he’ll get answers. That imp seems pretty chatty. Another nice snippet. 🙂 Love the detail about non-functional eyelids. Is that all imps or just this one?

  2. I want to know the answer. I also loved the information about the eyelids. This was such a good snippet. Loved it..

  3. I’m so fascinated by every detail of this world you’ve built, can’t wait to know more, get the answer to the question! Excellent excerpt!

  4. Love the elements in your world. Glad you are continuing with these snippets!

  5. Hmm, I’ll bet they met by design 🙂

  6. Kate Warren says:

    Good questions indeed. Love the flickering eyelid in place of a wink. This is shaping up nicely.

  7. Gem says:

    I love the way you’ve created Gideon and his world.

  8. J.A. Beard says:

    Interesting details.

  9. Carrie Crain says:

    Did they meet by chance, fate, or some other unexplained reason? Great detail on the eyelid.

  10. The imp is enjoying all of them. Different skills. Different actions. Yet all seem to work together.

  11. siobhanmuir says:

    I really liked the detail on the eyelids, Sue. 🙂

  12. the non-fuctional eyelids are definitely intriguing 😉

  13. Summer Ross says:

    Nice snippet. I’m a fan of demons and this sounds like a great read.
    I did notice in this sentence “well it wa more” ‘wa’ should be ‘was’
    Have a great day!

  14. poor guy! no eyelids, LOL! 😉

  15. Gemma Parkes says:

    I’m looking forward to the answers too, great snippet!

  16. I do wonder why Gideon is asking, and why he never asked before now. Very intriguing!

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