Thank you for your helpful comments last week when we met Charlotte a new transfer to the school.
Today’s snippet finishes off the paragraph and starts the next section where we meet four students from the class.
Genre: Fantasy, Coming of Age
Gladstone Thomas and his group of three friends since birth, know exactly what awaits them when they turn eighteen. Stone’s cousin, Robert Ward, owing to his helicopter mother, Sara, is unaware of his future. Meeting Charlotte, the new girl at school, is a life changer. Gladstone and his buddies are witness to Robert’s transformation from an indifferent student, careless dresser and narcissistic personality to a young man who accepts his responsibility. Once Stone learns the key position Robert will play, they must work together to ensure success.
For a moment Ms Simmons appeared undecided as to where Charlotte should sit, then said, “I see a seat next to Robert. Robert, raise your hand please.” Charlotte walked to the spot indicated and gracefully sat.
Stone Thomas, another student in the class had scrutinized Robert and Charlotte with interest.
After the third year history class, with an hour to kill before their next course, Stone and three other classmates: his girlfriend, Quinn Mulate, Kelly Hamilton and his girlfriend Vonny Dillard, gathered across the street in the park. The four had been friends since birth, all on the same day, June 11. Whenever Stone thought about the group his chest swelled with pride. They were all good looking, smart and with a love of fun and adventure.