Happy Hump Day. I’m continuing with my new fantasy, coming of age WIP. To read the participating authors click on the link.
Well that was fun in the park with the four kids eating their treats and enjoying nature. What happened to Robert and Charlotte you ask?
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“It looks like summer even though it’s September already. The trees are still green and full.” Wrinkling her nose, Quinn continued her thought. “What’s that smell? Sage?”
“They’re the Asters,” Kelly helpfully suggested, paying more attention to his ice-cream than to Quinn’s comment. His upper lip morphed into a chocolate mustache.
“That was interesting,” Stone commented. Vonny sat on a spot of grass while Quinn and Kelly stood close by eating their rapidly melting gelato. They raised their brows questioningly.
“Robert’s reaction to the new girl. He usually slouches in his seat and barely pays attention to anything a teacher says. When Charlotte smiled at him he straightened up, gave her as pleasant a look as I’ve ever seen on him, turned toward Ms Simmons, and seemed to actually listen.”
My cousin Robert is such a jerk! He should shoot down his mother’s helicopter, grow a pair of balls and man-up.
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Aww that’s a very gentle rant. 🙂 nice scene though.
gee have patience Elin…
An interesting reaction from everyone. 🙂
interesting?
nice interesting scene. I want to know more about poor Robert!
First read my ealier hump day and you’ll find out more next week
He’d better watch out from teasing from his friends. He’s been found out 🙂
Who’d better watch out?
Very nice. I couldn’t quite figure out where the italicized part was coming from, but I imagine if the scene was a little longer, I could put it together.
Yeah short bursts are a problem to read. The italicized is what he’s thinking – internal monologue
I think they are going to suss him out real soon…xx
not sure what you mean by “suss him out”
Hmm looks like Robert may have eyes for the new girl ^_^
ok – that’s one way to put it lol
Great reactions there, well done.
Interesting scene.