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I’m continuing with my short story, Nineteen Hundred, which is the prequel to The Soul Collector’s Second Chance.
Set up: It’s New Year’s Eve 1899 in a boarding house where the landlord has treated the residents to a large celebratory dinner. The newest member of the group, Gideon Thomas, piqued Kathryn St. Clair’s interest.
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Kathryn peeked under her lids to inspect the gentleman. He seemed younger than the rest of the group, perhaps a few years older than her twenty five.
He did not miss her surveillance. Mr. Thomas boldly scrutinized her in return. His deep brown eyes seemed to twinkle with interest. She quickly averted her gaze to concentrate on her clasped hands resting in her lap.
During the meal she couldn’t help but notice how the gas lamps played with the shadows on his face. Depending on the reflection, sometimes his eyes appeared shadowed and hidden, and at other times the light shone on his brown hair, almost giving a halo effect.
Nice description. I like the slow path you are putting here.
well it’s only 8 sentences and I do have a slow style. Thanks for the visit
Great descriptions, we can see them really clearly and the imagery of the room is excellent.
Thanks very much
I love that he seems both mysterious and angelic!
He is mysterious – hardly angelic – don’t know what I was thinking when I wrote that.
The hero is very intriguing, especially the details about the light and shadow. Terrific snippet!
yep that’s my Gideon lol
Oooh very nice scene you’re setting 🙂
thanks Sandra
Vivid imagery, and I’m definitely intrigued by Mr. Thomas as well. Lovely 8!
Hey thanks for the visit. My character and yours have issues in common lol
LOL. Those lovely rakes…always having trouble stumbling over those women that intrigue them 😉
the part I’m writing now is when he stops being a rake lol
very nice description and it sets the tone beautifully
thank you
Lovely description. I almost felt like I was there.
I’m told I did a good job with this period piece – thanks Elaine
Nothing like weak lighting to add atmosphere to a room. Great description. 🙂
I’m surprised more people didn’t go blind in that bad lighting – but yeah great for atmosphere
I think somebody has a crush! Nice 8, thanks for sharing.