Togetherness


this seems to be addictive – am doing it again

Hope it’s not too “off the wall”

 

 

Answer the question – Do you see her much?

in 42 words exactly

 Hand in hand she is always by my side. Never far from reach. When I cry, she cries. If I sleep she kicks me. It would be nice to be free and crawl away. Or so I imagine.
Co-joined twins, Mother frowns.

 

 

 

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29 Responses to Togetherness

  1. jannatwrites says:

    I hadn’t thought about it, but alone time would be impossible in this instance. I would make a lousy conjoined twin!

  2. Mike says:

    A thought provoking piece. So hard to even begin to imagine such ‘togetherness’.

  3. AZ Gringa says:

    I laughed. I probably shouldn’t have laughed…

  4. I was think “co-sleeping” with your child, until the end. Interesting!

  5. Marcy says:

    It’s interesting to think about what that would be like.

  6. Josh says:

    Hah! Nice surprise at the end; it is one of those topics I’ve always wondered at writing about and never got around to myself.

  7. shailajav says:

    Very tough to think and (write!) from that perspective. Handled very well, Sue!

    Shailaja’s post

  8. Christine says:

    “Or so I imagine.” Nice touch, that. Very cool take on the prompt – I would never have thought of this! Thanks for linking it up.

  9. I too was thinking of a very needy child until the end.

  10. Gina says:

    That is some kind of togetherness!

  11. M. L. Sexton says:

    I kind of felt where it was going before I got to the end. This was nice.

  12. tinsenpup says:

    What a wonderful, unique perspective on the prompt!

  13. habibadanyal says:

    conjoint twins! ah i had that idea too. only i imagined them to b joined at the head, the occiput to be exact. they wouldn’t be able to see each other much then would they

  14. atrm61 says:

    Conjoined twins?Yikes~!How terrible for everyone concerned!Interesting take on the prompt Sue:-)

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