Time for Blogophilia 11.7


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Time changes point of view
“they” say
The months passed

and now
my heart is comfortably numb

though the darkness of your touch still lingers

still I am needing you to be with me

You promised you wouldn’t walk away
and you didn’t
You were a sweet temptation but I knew it wouldn’t last
when we met fate smiled and left
thinking his work done

Please, don’t let me fall in love with you again

*****

that’s it – ran out of time lol – all the prompts in with several song lyrics

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Written for
Blogophilia Week 11.7 Topic: Point of View

Bonus Points:

(Hard, 2 points) Incorporate a lyric from the singer/poet Jewel

(Easy, 1 point) Include the phrase “a touch of darkness”

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18 Responses to Time for Blogophilia 11.7

  1. Fifteen minute write? Very nicely put together.

  2. Marvin says:

    Your weaving of words and the incorporation of the prompts is astounding!
    8 points Earthling! 🙂

  3. Doris Emmett says:

    Love can be so very fickle…walking in and out and returning to the “scene of the crime”…great write!

  4. Tyler/Chuck says:

    My heart is comfortably numb – been there done that. Hope you are having a great trip

  5. BarbaraK aka fiddlbarb says:

    And I love it! So eloquently expressed. Wonderful Blogophilia 11.7!

  6. trev says:

    feeling the victim in a love tangle feels right at the time Sue…
    this is a timely reminder of that and served as a seamless intervention of the challenges girl..
    brilliantly penned Sue. love it.. 🙂 xxx

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