Time changes point of view
“they” say
The months passed
and now
my heart is comfortably numb
though the darkness of your touch still lingers
still I am needing you to be with me
You promised you wouldn’t walk away
and you didn’t
You were a sweet temptation but I knew it wouldn’t last
when we met fate smiled and left
thinking his work done
Please, don’t let me fall in love with you again
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that’s it – ran out of time lol – all the prompts in with several song lyrics
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Written for Blogophilia Week 11.7 Topic: Point of ViewBonus Points:
(Hard, 2 points) Incorporate a lyric from the singer/poet Jewel
(Easy, 1 point) Include the phrase “a touch of darkness”
Ah… Maybe you should learn, and not fall in love with that person. haha . Lovely work!
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Fifteen minute write? Very nicely put together.
well more than 15 and it could have been better lol
Your weaving of words and the incorporation of the prompts is astounding!
8 points Earthling! 🙂
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Beautiful words.
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Love can be so very fickle…walking in and out and returning to the “scene of the crime”…great write!
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My heart is comfortably numb – been there done that. Hope you are having a great trip
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And I love it! So eloquently expressed. Wonderful Blogophilia 11.7!
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feeling the victim in a love tangle feels right at the time Sue…
this is a timely reminder of that and served as a seamless intervention of the challenges girl..
brilliantly penned Sue. love it.. 🙂 xxx
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A very powerful write!
~~DJ
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