Time changes point of view
The months passed
my heart is comfortably numb
though the darkness of your touch still lingers
still I am needing you to be with me
You promised you wouldn’t walk away
and you didn’t
You were a sweet temptation but I knew it wouldn’t last
when we met fate smiled and left
thinking his work done
Please, don’t let me fall in love with you again
that’s it – ran out of time lol – all the prompts in with several song lyrics
***Written for Blogophilia Week 11.7 Topic: Point of View
(Hard, 2 points) Incorporate a lyric from the singer/poet Jewel
(Easy, 1 point) Include the phrase “a touch of darkness”
Ah… Maybe you should learn, and not fall in love with that person. haha . Lovely work!
Fifteen minute write? Very nicely put together.
well more than 15 and it could have been better lol
Your weaving of words and the incorporation of the prompts is astounding!
8 points Earthling! 🙂
Love can be so very fickle…walking in and out and returning to the “scene of the crime”…great write!
My heart is comfortably numb – been there done that. Hope you are having a great trip
And I love it! So eloquently expressed. Wonderful Blogophilia 11.7!
feeling the victim in a love tangle feels right at the time Sue…
this is a timely reminder of that and served as a seamless intervention of the challenges girl..
brilliantly penned Sue. love it.. 🙂 xxx
A very powerful write!