It’s time again for
Six Sentence Sunday. Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and a great way to meet new writers!
This is my first entry with this group. My lines are from a series of character sketches which I hope will form a short story collection at some point.
Oh, Oh here comes trouble, thought Joleene, the paralegal in the law firm.
“Good afternoon, Chester,” she said and smiled. She noticed a slight flutter in her tummy.
Chester did not smile back. Instead, glowering, he asked, “Did you check over this brief for my court case tomorrow?”
“Yes I did, I double checked and corrected the section of the Act you referenced; it is 21(f) not 23(d) as you had indicated.”
Be sure to check out the other great participants and thanks so much for stopping by!
Nice snippet! Welcome to SSS!
the “snippets” get better !! thank you so much !
She caught his mistake! Well done.
thank you – oh yes – 6 sentences by 6 sentences you will learn all about Chester – and – his “charming” wife Priscilia
Welcome to SSS!
Not liking Chester too much. But I love the paralegal!
😀 – wait – you will like Chester even less !!!
Be nice, Chester.
giggle – not in his nature – wait and see !! Thank you !
Chester needs to learn some manners!
sorry you think that – he might – eventually…. thank you !
welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Really enjoyed your six! I wonder how Chester reacts to being corrected?
~Sarah
Oh thank you for that !! Oh just wait and see !!!
fun and interesting lol Welcome to SSS!
thank you – hope will still be fun when you learn more !! 😀
Welcome to SSS!
thank you !
Nice six. I wonder if Chester will change his ways.
guess you will have to wait and see 😀 thank you !
Great start to SSS.
Thank you very much ! It’s been fun !
Welcome to SSS! I enjoyed your post. Do you work in law?
thank you – no I don’t work in Law, and have no idea why Chester picked this profession out for himself. I did work with legislation before I retired. thanks for the good comment !
Welcome to SSS
You’re doing a wonderful job of portraying both Chester (the ‘ol stuffed shirt) and the paralegal here.
Great debut to Six Sentence Sunday. Looking forward to more in the future.
I’m so glad ! Chester might be more than just a stuff shirt… will be more next week. Had a wonderful reception here – great group !
Sassy heroine! Welcome to SSS!
well… actually I am Sassy… and the paralegal just had this one shot appearance… thanks for reading
Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. What an introduction to Chester. Good for Joleene for checking his work…and correcting it.
I’ll look forward to reading more of your work in weeks to come.
and you’ll get more – wonderful reception here – thanks !
Nice snippet. I bet he doesn’t even thank her. 😦
oh – you don’t know the half of it – LMAO – just wait !! Thank you very much !
Glad to have you here for 6 Sunday. I enjoy reading about real world things like law. Glad she caught his error, that might not have turned out well for him.
gather you not a fan of fantasy … well my characters are real life for sure – it might still not turn out well for him … Thank you very much !!
Welcome to SSS! These look like the start to a great story.
thank you ! Don’t know if it will be great – but my characters will sucker you in lol
Ooo! very interesting! and welcome to SSS!!
xx
Angela
thank you very much ! you are a great bunch !
wondering why she has a flutter in her stomach, could it be she’s scared of him, or turned on just by being near him. Hmmm I’d like to read more to find out 🙂 Nice Six!!
oh – can’t fool you ! and so you shall fine out ! Thank you !
Welcome to the group, with legal flutters and all!
cute term – legal flutters lol – thank yu very much
Great to see you here, Sue! *waves* 😀
waving back !! grinning !!