It’s time again for Six Sentence Sunday. Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and a great way to meet new writers!
Be sure to check out the other great participants, and thanks so much for stopping by!
Change of pace – No more, for now, crazy Chester or his wife Priscilla.
The snippet today is from The Devil’s Mistress – series of short stories. Today I start at the end of the first story and how they meet.
How did we meet?
One day while walking down a quiet residential street in my neighbourhood, a small incident caught my attention.
A car had swerved and run into a hydro pole.
Quick as a wink, I whipped out my cell to call 911 when I noticed a glimmer of light close to the vehicle.
I scrunched up my eyes, hoping to understand what I had seen and turned my head and quickly turned it back, as I could not believe my eyes.
A man, a very good looking, well dressed man, in his 30s, was doing something close to the car.
i am a fan of these stories, so yay! 😀
okay, I admit, I’m a fan of Sue writing in general, but you know 😉
when I went to write these lines I noticed that all started with “I” so had to change them. Did that with some of the other submissions as well. This six sentence exercise is good to clean up the writes. And thank you 🙂
Great six sentances..I wonder what was he doing?
😀 guess you will have to see next week – I don’t see one for you this week …. thanks for the early comment !
Ooh, what was he doing?
You’ll never guess ! Thanks for the comment !
Interesting six! What is he doing?
Maybe I’ll tell you next week 😀
Nice meet!
thank you ! it was !
Ooh, what was that good-looking man doing? Intriguing 6. I kinda stumbled on the phrase “Quick as a wink”, though. It just didn’t seem like something that character would say, although it’s probably not fair for me to form an opinion of your character in just 6 sentences.
You are spot on !! – will send you e mail
I’m curious to know more about the sparkle of light and what this man was doing.
I agree with J.C. “Quick as a wink” sounds magical as if the cell phone was summoned to the characters hand. not sure if that’s what you’re trying to portray or not.
no “sparkles” no no no
I agree with J.C. also – bad editing on my part – but glad you mentioned it also – thank you
Love the Devil’s Mistress title! Intriguing six!
thank you ! Glad you enjoyed – yes yes it will be explained 😀
You know what I think he’s doing, and I blame it on the other writers in this group making my mind dirty every weekend. *innocent look*
yes I know what you mean about all those graphic writers 😀 thank you for commenting
LOL, have to agree. I want to know what he’s doing!
all in good time – you’ll never guess…..
ohhh attention grabbed, what was he doing…and what was the sparkle of light. Hmmm
glad it caught attention – all in time for what doing – and – as I said above “no no no sparkles”
Intriguing! Caught my attention too. 🙂
thank you !
Yes, what’s he doing? Inquiring minds want, hell, demand to know. You’re going to give us more next Sunday. Right
Don’t get knickers in a twist – all in good time – demanding is not lady like 😀
Who said anything about being a lady.
LMAO – gottcha – thanks for the laugh 😀
I’m definitely wondering what he is, and what he’s up to.
what he is – that is the question – very good !
What a very intriguing set-up. It sure makes me curious about what could be going on from the wreck, to the people in the car, to the man being seen.
well stated comment 🙂
The sparkle of light has caught me!
no no sparkles !!! Buffy killed Edward – the end !!!
I want to hear more about him!
You will hear more about him – lots more !! thanks !
I think I might know what he’s doing, but then I’m cheating, because I’ve read another piece from The Devil’s Mistress. The one that took place in New Orleans. 😀
shhhh – don’t give it away – good thing you did this at the end of last week’s 😀