It’s time again for Six Sentence Sunday
Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and a great way to meet new writers!
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Last week from the story The Devil’s Mistress, We left her noticing a very good looking man standing by a crashed vehicle. She was confused. She could not comprehend what the glimmer of light close to the car, that she knows she saw, could possibly be.
You will still not know either – stay tuned and let me tell my story 😀
At the same time I observed a blip of light that seemed to emanate from the driver of the car. The blip disappeared as soon as it began and the fine looking fellow started to saunter off. At that moment he looked across and saw me watching. Now he did the double take as he realized I had clearly seen him. He walked over to me while my finger was still poised on the 9 key of my cell. I couldn’t tear my eyes off him; he sure was hot looking
sassyspeaks 
…and he would be! All the “bad boys” are. LOL! Can’t wait to read the rest
oh – yes – and he is so the bad boy !!!
Ohh I want to know what will happen next….
Six sentences is like sound bites – little by little …. 😀
Hot enough to freeze her on the spot. Now that’s a whole lot of hotness!
You will eventually see just how hot !!! thanks for the comment
Nice! Especially learning he’s a very hot bad boy. 😉
hot yes – but a sweetie too – in his own way – 😀
Nice scene. Makes me want to know more!
good good – then I am doing my job 😀
Love it! Really enjoyed your first POV description. Great job. 🙂
thanks very much ! I don’t usually write first person but no choice for these stories !
Yeay! More from this scene… I’m so hooked! Nice six x
you made me grin – one more from this scene then – who knows – oh thank you so much !
Really enjoyed this. I’d love to see more of him!! Yumm
You will see lots of him – I promise – oh – not “lots” like that lol
A hot bad boy with a spark, nice.
what makes you think the spark comes from him ? 😀
Finger posed on the 9 key. Oh yeah, that’s distraction. Hope you’ll post more next week.
And yes SSS = sound bytes. Great analogy. 🙂
She was getting ready to call 911, remember – yes more next week – thanks
Alien….Angel… come on, what is he?
If I tell you’ll stop reading – but there is more to it than just what he is …
Bet she nevers punchs the ‘9’ key.
And yes Sassy, maybe next week I’ll have more of Pickering
well – as you will see next week – actually she does push the 9 key – that’s not giving anything away – cheers – sue
Too hot to dial for help? Wowza, that’s one hot guy!
Just maybe she did not need any help ?
Yes, I want more! I guess I’ll have to wait until next week.
yes you will have to wait til next week 😀
In that case, I’d stare, too! Nice six!
thanks !
What a yummy six!!
yummy ? Giggle
Ah, such a tease. What’s the blip?
Guess I’ll have to come back to see.
that’s me – the blip teaser
Hmmm. Can’t help but wonder how he can freeze her in place. Is it just his looks – or is it his power, too? Or something else?
she’s not frozen
Intriguing that he did not expect to be noticed, and that he’s hot enough to distract her from calling for help!
have no fear – help is on the way – thanks !
Those hot guys will get you every time!
You should know – your guy is plenty hot too !
Hot or not, he sounds like bad news…
well – as far as she is concerned – good news
Mysterious!
it gets explained eventually ! thanks
Great six, talk about keeping us in suspense! 🙂
thank you !