It’s time again for Six Sentence Sunday
Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and a great way to meet new writers!
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Last week from the story Devil’s Mistress –
She is paralyzed observing a good looking man after a car crashes – and knows she saw a light flash close to the vehicle. He is aware she was watching him – her finger is still on the “9″ of her cell intending to call 911.
He speaks:
“Hi there. Did you see that accident?”
“Yes”, and I blurted out the rest, “And I saw you kinda whisper to the driver and a blip of a light came out of the car and vanished.”
He smiled a Johnny Depp sort of grin. “Most people are blind to me and to what transpired there.”
He noticed my state of confusion and offered a suggestion: “why don’t you call 911 but block your number, so that this man is taken care of and let me buy you a coffee and we can discuss what you think you saw.”
ok – next week I can spill the beans as to who he is – or carry on with the story….. even if you know what he is, the story is still amusing, I think anyway 😀
“what you think you saw” – ha! can’t wait to hear his explanation for this!
Actually, he never does give an explanation – she tells us what he does
Interesting!
Thank you Taryn !
Intriguing six!
Thank you Sarah !
“What you think you saw” sounds like a good discussion in the making. lol
Oh – they never discuss it – hmm I should do that scene … thanks for the idea 😀
Nah, don’t spill the beans. Keep going. And then make us buy the book!
Sad to say there is no book – Just stories I write – Thanks for the vote of confidence
I’d love to know more!
And so you shall !
Oooooo – but is he a rogue? should she go with him – or not? Can’t wait till next week!
a rogue ?? – she goes all right !!!
I can’t wait to find out what he is and what he did. Nice six!
and so you shall ! Thank you 😀
can’t wait to see what he is!
ok – next week
Interesting….
Thank you
Spill the beans. Please, spill the beans.
they shall spill – next week – or start spilling
Great six! Can’t wait to read more and find out who he is. 🙂
ok – thanks !
you had me at ‘Johnny Depp Smile’ LMAO …oh, and this just gets more and more intriguing…what she thinks she saw? LOVE IT I’m really curious to know what the bleep is going on here. Really curious.
curious is good 😀 thank you – glad I aroused you ….
Curiouser and curioser–an intriguing six!
thank you very much
Wow…that six…seven packed a punch. I wonder what he’s going to convince her she really saw.
did I have seven ?? well we find out all about it but writing the scene where he tells her what etc might be amusing – thank you !
He had me with his Johnny Depp smile *wink*wink*
nudge nudge – tempted to put some sex scenes into this LMAO