It’s time again for Six Sentence Sunday
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Last week he had just told her what he does and who he works for. This snippet is actually something I’ve cut from the original but works well here
Hearing him spin this load of rubbish she glared at him; how stupid does he think I am?
She didn’t know if he was giving her a line or what.
He sat comfortably at ease with no evidence that he wasn’t telling the truth; but then, she thought, if he really did work for the devil, he wouldn’t have a ‘tell’ to show he was lying.
Oh my goodness!
Do I believe him then?
She thought about his story some more and could think of no other explanation for the glimmer of light she had seen.
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Sounds like she’s having a problem trying to believe him or not. Come on, would someone really admit the worked for Mr.D if they didn’t. Then again, she could pass the glimmer of light off as a solar flare.
This six really opens up so many questions. Great job.
Hey – ya never know what lines a man will use 😀
Devil’s henchman or not, this man is fascinating. Your characters are pulling me back each week to read more. Great snippet. I want more.
Your encouragement and support warms the cockles of my heart 😀
I like this! Great character insight!
thank you very much !
Hmm…mysterious man who may work for the Devil. Intriguing. 🙂
“Hearing him spin this load of rubbish she glared at him” may need a bit of revising as it reads a bit like a run-on sentence. Perhaps “She glared at him” would suffice?
Glad to see you back !!!
Very descriptive, interesting writing. Great voice.
thank you very much ! really apprciate it
This is such an interesting story!
Ilike it too ! Keep delaying the end – thank you so much
‘work for the devil’? Now that’s intriguing!
Yes he is part of the midmanagement team 😀
I wonder what the truth is as well. He is obviously different. Great six!
Truth is he works for Mr. D in mid mangement postion extracting souls – simple 😀
A mystery man with a great poker face. Love it!
that’s one way to look at it 😀
I’d be having trouble beleiving him too but then somebody has to work for Mr. D. He can’t do it all by himself.
right 😀 God has his angels and Mr. D has his mid management team – thanks for the comment !
Good job. I’m very interesting in seeing this story develop.
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You and me both ! Thanks !
Oo, an outtake! Very cool. 🙂 Thanks for the peek behind the scenes.
lol thanks – but after seeing some comments may put it in after all in a different form
I like this! I always hate it when the heroine just automatically believes this stuff because people wouldn’t really. If you told someone that their first reaction would be “Quit kidding!”
You’ve got a point – so this is something else WE have to work on 😀
Great…build up our curiosity and leave us hanging. *lol* Looking forward to finding out more about our mystery man.
Well the basics have been provided here in previous weeks…
I think she’s got a valid, real world reaction–wondering if he thinks she’s gullible. On the other hand, what kind of proof would a girl want to ask for from…uh, the Devil’s employee? Intriguing six!
You’ve definately got a valid point – hmmm – back to the drawing board – thank you !
Yeah, that definitely sounds like a guy she needs to be careful around.
Well – will say this ends up to be the best relationship she’s ever had….
It’s not something I’d really want to believe in either 🙂
you don’t have to – it will be a good story
In her shoes I’d be a bit confused too.
I love reading deleted scenes, they always add something to the final polished novel.
yes so true – but now I’ve re thought this and may add a revised version to the story. Thanks so much
What a quandary! Would she expect someone who really worked for the devil to be a truthful person? But then, why would he make up such a lie?
Good points! Believe the outrageous or believe the cleaverness – thanks for stopping by
I don’t blame her for being wary in that situation. Nice six.
yes – it is quite unbelievable – thanks for visiting !
yes, very real. I’d have a hard time too, if someone told me he worked for the devil. ;]
this is an example of how valuable SSS is – I was not going to use this in the final – but was convinced to use it in some format
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