Yea! It’s Sunday and time for Six Sentence Sunday
Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and really a great way to meet new writers!
And I’ve met some terrific people. Thank you !
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This week we return to chapter one see here when Phoebe meets the rest of the group for the first time.
You can find the first snippet from this scene here.
With a big smile he (Charles) flung open the door.
“Welcome!”
A quick glimpse revealed a petite woman dwarfed even more so by Gideon’s six feet.
“Come in, Come in,” and he gestured for them to enter.
Before Phoebe had a chance to shrug off her blue and violet print jacket, Charles wrapped his arms around her like a warm blanket on a cold night, noting the jacket matched her eyes.
His profession, as a primary school teacher, had taught him to watch for details otherwise the munchkins would bite his ankles and stampede away from the building as fast as their chubby legs could carry them.
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It’s true, you gotta watch those those little ones. Nice six! 🙂
better check and make sure your kids teacher is not married to a devil’s agent…
Munchkins with chubby legs. How funny! This teacher better watch out! Lol.
the kids better watch out. Charles’ wife works for mr d
Love the description of Phoebe. Bet that jacket makes her eyes “pop.” I hope Gideon is okay with Charles’s enthusiasm! 🙂 Great six!
he is Gid’s best friend – we really need to talk ya know 😀
Love that he notices her eyes 🙂
can’t help but notice them – blueberry with hint of violet
Love this six, especially the munchkins with chubby legs LOL
cute eh?
Interesting.
it will b e
Okay now I want to read this book. Loved this six and loved how you described everything. So much so I want this book. 🙂 Really good job!
well thanks so much but still working on chapter three and much to go
As a fellow teacher, I totally relate to the last paragraph. 🙂
ha ha
I only wish some of my kids’ teachers had been this observant, lol. Well done!
😀 thanks
Nice six. Love the ‘chubby little legs’. Brought a smile to my face.
always glad to give a smile 😀
Nice detail. Great six!
thanks!
“otherwise the munchkins would bite his ankles and stampede away from the building as fast as their chubby legs could carry them.”
loved this!!
Munchkins…or perhaps goblins depending on the class. 😉
that puts a whole new spin on it
thank you very much 😀
As usual, beautiful work the the details. So great at putting us into the scene!
🙂