Happy Sunday! It’s a long week end here and we’ll probably be planting the garden. I’ll try to read as soon as I can.
I decided to try out my WIP, unnamed for now, called The Children on my computer. It’s my first attempt at a fantasy.
Hastily written blurb:
Gladstone Thomas and his group of three, friends since birth, know exactly what awaits them when they hit the age of eighteen. Stone’s cousin Robert Ward owing to his helicopter mother, Sara, is not aware of his future. Meeting Charlotte, the new girl at school, is a life changer . Gladstone and his buddies are witness to Robert’s transformation from as an indifferent student, careless dresser and narcissistic personality to his finally agreeing to Charlotte’s plan. Once Stone learns the key position Robert will play, they must work together to ensure success.
The opening eight sentences which is not quite the full paragraph
Ms Simmons rapped her knuckles on the desk at the front of the history class. A few murmurs and the sound of chairs scraping against the wood floor quieted down when she spoke. “May I have your attention please? I’d like to introduce a new student to our group.” The teacher stepped back allowing a young woman standing behind to move forward. Cobalt blue eyes dominated her face framed perfectly by pale almost translucent skin and white-blonde hair. “This is Charlotte and she is a recent transfer. Please make her feel welcome.”