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Set up: Gideon and Phoebe have spent some time in the restaurant getting to know each other and now he has suggested they go to her room.
Gideon quietly stood next to Phoebe watching the numbers crawl their way to ’16’, and though she kept peeking up at him, no doubt wondering why he did not even hold her hand, his body did not touch hers.
The sensation when he had placed his hand on her back as they left the restaurant was like coming home.
He picked up a faint odor of worry emanating from Phoebe as well as another passengers’ bitter perfume.
In addition to the two of them, several people had entered the elevator at the lobby level.
He was still old-fashioned in this regard and did not believe in public displays of affection.
However what he planned to do with her once they arrived safely in the suite, could not rightly be called ‘affection.’
sassyspeaks 
Sounds like he has some naughty plans for her. 🙂
Perhaps 😀
Great place to finish the six… I want the rest. LOL
You’ve seen them already in previous weeks 😀
Hey Sue! I’m back from vacation. Gideon sounds cautiously optimistic!! What a gentleman, what a gentleman he is. Swoon!
Yep swoon worthy for sure
“The sensation when he had placed his hand on her back as they left the restaurant was like coming home.” I love this sentence!
LOL thanks – that was the last version of so many
I do like his voice here…his plans don’t involve “affection.” Great line.
thank you Cara. Hopefully you’ll like the new version too
The “felt like coming home” line is a gem! Perfectly describes his feelings. Love his gentleman-like exterior behavior, and his implied “naughty thoughts” interior. Excellent six!
thanks. The new version will be very different
I love his old-fashioned morals, even if he is thinking something totally different when they’re alone. Nothing like the ‘perfect gentleman’ who smolders with hot sensuality in private! 🙂
That’s my Gideon, and your Caleb 😀
He’s so suave, and yet so naughty, too. Loved this part. Great six!!
yeah this was one of the better sections 😀
This is considerate – both for her and the other folk in the elevator. PDAs aren’t always welcome or appropriate. Ten out of ten for Gideon.
what’s a pda?
oooh, fun times ahead! 🙂
Actually you missed them lol
Nice six! Gideon sounds like a great leading man.
Yes, he does lead, that is true
I like his gentleman guise as he tenses for pleasure soon. Nice.
and nice comment, thanks
I like the tension set up here and the elevator is the perfect scene for this. Good six!
Thanks very much!
I agree with Cara. That last line sizzles. I think restraint can be as sexy as passionate tussling, so I loved this. Really built up tension for the moment they do enter her suite!
thank you for the tense comment 😀
felt like I was right there in the elevator! way to amp up the tension 😉
Wonder if the other passengers noticed. thanks for stopping by
Cheeky. 🙂 Great build-up to a fun scene, I’m sure.