Six Sentence Sunday July 8

Yea! It’s Sunday and time for Six Sentence Sunday

Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and really a great way to meet new writers!

And I’ve met some terrific people. Thank you !

Be sure to check out the other great participants and thanks so much for stopping by.

As I said last week I can use all the helpful comments I can get. And to those who asked for more heat on Gideon’s part, the first sentence this week would have been the 7th last week. 😀


Wanting to rip their clothing from their bodies, he restrained his trembling fingers, but his need to touch her skin fueled his impatience, together they managed to remove her dress, without ripping it to shreds in the process.

In a moment he removed her lacy bra and tossed it away, her nipples stood erect, the areola wrinkled.

As he bent to kiss them in admiration, her hand shoved him away and quickly moved to unfasten his buttons, her tongue stuck at the edge of her mouth in concentration.

He shrugged his shirt off his shoulders, standing he freed himself from the constricting trousers.

Phoebe glanced at him. “No underwear?”

















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31 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday July 8

  1. Wow. Talk about hot and steamy! Happy six sentence sunday!

  2. Heather Boyd says:

    Oh wow, a double steamy feature. Freeballing, too. Thanks for the pic!

  3. Jessica Subject says:

    No underwear? 🙂 And a great pic to match!

  4. Kate Warren says:

    “her tongue stuck at the edge of her mouth in concentration” Awesome detail!

  5. Gemma Parkes says:

    Love the way you write! Pacy and sexy post!

  6. Mae Clair says:

    OMG, what an ending! Fun and sexy!

  7. K.E. Saxon says:

    Very sexy! This is a great scene (and thanks for the visual to go with, LOL!)

  8. Jenna Jaxon says:

    Gideon goes commando! I love that new detail about him. 🙂 Wonderfully steamy snippet! And the pic…need to crank down the ac in here!

  9. Cara Bristol says:

    Yep, It’s heating up. Both the writing and the pix.

  10. Jess Schira says:

    You’ve done a great job of showing how much he wants her, and the amount of restraint he’s using. Great job!

  11. sue says:

    Very perceptive of you. Thank you 😀

  12. J.M. Blackman says:

    Great six today, too–keeping with the details that make this realistic and sexy at the same time. Wonderful.

  13. Ah, so he’s going commando! Sexy 6!

  14. Gem says:

    Yep, disrobing fast without ripping, scratching, or tearing, takes concentration. Great six. 😀

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