Yea! It’s Sunday and time for Six Sentence Sunday
Every week participants post six sentences from something they are writing – or have written. It’s a lot of fun and really a great way to meet new writers!
And I’ve met some terrific people. Thank you !
Be sure to check out the other great participants and thanks so much for stopping by.
As I said last week I can use all the helpful comments I can get. And to those who asked for more heat on Gideon’s part, the first sentence this week would have been the 7th last week. 😀
Wanting to rip their clothing from their bodies, he restrained his trembling fingers, but his need to touch her skin fueled his impatience, together they managed to remove her dress, without ripping it to shreds in the process.
In a moment he removed her lacy bra and tossed it away, her nipples stood erect, the areola wrinkled.
As he bent to kiss them in admiration, her hand shoved him away and quickly moved to unfasten his buttons, her tongue stuck at the edge of her mouth in concentration.
He shrugged his shirt off his shoulders, standing he freed himself from the constricting trousers.
Phoebe glanced at him. “No underwear?”
Wow. Talk about hot and steamy! Happy six sentence sunday!
thanks though hot enough here just with the weather
Oh wow, a double steamy feature. Freeballing, too. Thanks for the pic!
You’re very welcome
No underwear? 🙂 And a great pic to match!
thanks Jess 😀
“her tongue stuck at the edge of her mouth in concentration” Awesome detail!
Thank you for that!
Love the way you write! Pacy and sexy post!
I wish everyone did – thank you I appreciate it
OMG, what an ending! Fun and sexy!
they do go together…
Very sexy! This is a great scene (and thanks for the visual to go with, LOL!)
yeah finally found a good pic – glad you enjoyed
Gideon goes commando! I love that new detail about him. 🙂 Wonderfully steamy snippet! And the pic…need to crank down the ac in here!
there is much Gideon hasn’t whispered in your ear…
Yep, It’s heating up. Both the writing and the pix.
Thanks Cara
You’ve done a great job of showing how much he wants her, and the amount of restraint he’s using. Great job!
Very perceptive of you. Thank you 😀
Very hot!
Yes it is. Oh, you meant the snippet lol
Great six today, too–keeping with the details that make this realistic and sexy at the same time. Wonderful.
thank you. I always appreciate your comments 😀
And I’m always happy to give them. 🙂
Ah, so he’s going commando! Sexy 6!
the devil made him do it lol
nice! 😀 ❤
thanks JO
Yep, disrobing fast without ripping, scratching, or tearing, takes concentration. Great six. 😀
I had to concentrate on that 😀